Sometimes hot girls can supercede technical shortcomings just by being hot girls and doing what they do, but other times shoddy production work can ruin it for everyone.

The sex itself is fine, but the videography is haphazard, particularly in many of the angles, the shakiness (buy a tripod already) and the too frequent zooming in and out. It's a constant reminder to the viewer that that he is not there, and viewers don't need to be reminded of that.